After the divorce with the male god - chapter 22
Tian Li had an idea, but it really made her write her idea systematically, which was a bit difficult. After all, she had written 800-word compositions before.
Fortunately, there was Liang Jinze next to her. They were not the same. Guan Ce gave the script to Liang Jinze just because of his ability to tell stories.
Guan Ce and Liang Jinze entered the Xing Yao Company together. After working together for a while, they naturally understood each other’s capabilities.
After Liang Jinze and Tian Li discussed, he began to write. How could he not know how such a girl should deal with problems.
Change a role that needs female No. 2 to give charity and lead female No. 2 to the abyss. Then change into a role that strives to get rid of difficulties and get out of the abyss.
So familiar, how could he not know how to shape this image.
Even if there was no Female No. 1, she can also walk to the light of life.
Female No. 1 just happened to meet her, and then illuminate her haze with the light in her heart.
How could there be no haze?
It was originally sought after by people and attracted people’s attention, and it suddenly fell to the lowest point in life.
No matter how calm and still she looked outside, there was no way to explain the days and nights that made her restless.
Liang Jinze has never had such an explosion of inspiration at this moment.
After he dropped out of the circle, he hadn’t written anything, as if he had been drained of inspiration all at once.
At this moment, everything seems to be back.
Tian Li did not know what Liang Jinze waas thinking and going through right now.
The two of them were very tacit. When Liang Jinze began to write, Tian Li began to read. Her knowledge reserve was too little. She feels that she herself has actually reached a height that her knowledge reserve cannot handle.
She had to make up quickly, and she didn’t want to drag Liang Jinze behind.
Their combined dream must also be done together.
The desks of the two were facing each other, and as soon as they looked up, they could see each other’s seriousness.
Aze was watching cartoons outside the room.
The scenery of the community was very good and the trees are tall. In the humid air, the faint cicadas can be heard.
In time, Liang Jinze had already written a part.
Liang jinze handed Tian Li his written work, “Take it and have a look at it. Is there any problem? The audience of our film should be young women, you stand at this angle to see if there is any problem.”
Tian Li started to look it up.
She knew that her own male god was talented that would not be encountered for a hundred years.
But she never knew that his talent had reached this point.
Under the arrangement of the other party, some terrible scenes not only became reasonable, but more importantly, the heroine was the kind of person she thought!
“Male God!!”
After Tian Li finished reading, she looked up at Liang Jinze, “I suddenly felt that I am not worthy of being your fan…”
Liang Jinze laughed, “You are my only fan. If you are expelled from the fan club, I will be the commander of bare sticks.”
“Trust me, if I wait for you to kill the rivers and lakes, absolutely thousands of fans will come to worship!” Tian Li had no doubt about this.
Liang Jinze leaned in to Tian Li and knocked her forehead, “Okay, hurry up, if there is anything that needs to be changed, take off your fan filter before talking.”
“Okay.” Tian Li positioned something seriously to the bridge of her nose. In fact, she had nothing, but that action was like picking up a pair of glasses.
“Below, I’ll comment on it in an open and fair manner,” Tian Li said, and cleared her throat in a fake manner, like a teaching director. “The work by Classmate Liang Jinze. First of all, it has a very good intention. The messy elements have been re-integrated and become one. “
Liang Jinze laughed, “I want to hear the shortcomings.”
“You are embarrassing me!” Tian Li said with a smile, and then, Tian Li still couldn’t help but ask, “Which one… Will the heroine and the second female lead be too ambiguous? In fact, it’s harmless, so their feelings are also very beautiful.”
Liang Jinze’s throat was a little dry, and he couldn’t help asking, “Is the emotional line obvious? I didn’t notice it when I wrote…”
Tian Li said seriously, “Obviously, comrade, when I saw it, I really couldn’t see it. You are a bachelor who doesn’t believe in love. I thought you weren’t leaving our big single dog group forever.”
She then turned to another page, Tian Li was simple, her girl heart was overflowing. Holding her face, she said, “In fact, the emotional drama is really super sweet, turning the original unilateral charity into a two-way redemption, especially the second female lead in chemotherapy. Before, she told the heroine that without her, she might’ve lived for naught in the eyes of others for the rest of her life. In the evaluation of others, it was her who made her find her own path. Her old girl’s heart was almost blown up, but the pent up emotions were released. After that, if they die, it is by friendship, and no one else can say anything.”
Liang Jinze didn’t want to talk, he wanted to be quiet…
Was it really that obvious?
“I’ll take a look at it myself and perfect it.” Liang Jinze took the script.
Tian Li immediately advised, “Don’t delete emotional drama.”
Liang Jinze said solemnly, “I still have to delete the ambiguous part, so it won’t destroy their pure friendship.”
Tian Li grabbed the book, “Who said to delete it? This is the interaction of the soul, the salvation of the soul! How can I use the word ambiguous to describe it…”
Liang Jinze laughed, “What made you worry? I won’t delete emotional drama. I’m just revising it to see if there is anything that needs to be improved.”
So Tian Li sat beside him and watched him continue to perfect the story.
Finally, after thorough revision, Liang Jinze took a photo and sent it to Guan Ce.
Guan Ce quickly returned the message.
“F’ck, why can’t you use your computer to type?” Guan Ce’s complaint was very serious.
“I’m lazy.” Liang Jinze replied.
“When I finished reading this script, maybe my eyes would be blind.”
“Friend, cherish it.”
“Liang Jinze, are you retaliating for my speech today?”
“Don’t talk nonsense.”
“This is a bother.”
“How do you still have a brain?”
“Liang Jinze, don’t think you were the pretty boy with the charming tongue. Wake up, you are already as fat as two people, you can only take the good temper and fat guy route.”
Then after half an hour later, Guan Ce finished reading the script.
“Dad Liang, I was wrong!” Guan Ce cried.
“Go away, I don’t have a son.” Liang Jinze hung up the call.
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